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[[Not about me Wink. Hopefully this is easier than my Villanelle?!]]

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Corroded concord.

[Wondered, Wandered, Meandered.]

Here’s ultima Thule
in the Middle of Nowhere
[unexpected, unexplored].

Vipers envenom.
Scorpions sting.
Vultures lust for flesh.
Dragons fire poison.
[They are all good,
all good, all good.]

Paths stray.
Time flits.
Love wilts.
Dreams fade.

Embracing Cyclones.
Cradling Whirlpools.
Exquisite agonies.
Homey scars.

[It is all good,
all good, all good.]

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A person who is nice to you, but rude to the waiter, is not a nice person.
~Dave Barry, Dave Barry turns 50 (Crown)
 
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Apparently this was riddle-ish too Razzer. I’m co-titling it ‘Comfortable compromise’ per someone’s suggestion to convey the theme better.

link to this in the wildflower patch.
 
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Limitlessly intriguing. Not many suggestions, this one's ready to be pulled off the assembly line.


-LM
 
Posts: 454 | Location: Ohio | Registered:: 06-20-2004Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Thanks Sercury, happy you find it ‘limitlessly intriguing’, for a while I had wondered if this was gonna be replylessly unpopular, however I had posted it in Wildflower Patch nonetheless then ('to be fair to it' Wink). Turned out there were some besides me that liked it fine. Thanks!

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