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Ellan Vannin is the Celtic name for the Isle of Man, and the names of the characters are real Celtic names, and the triskelion is the three legged symbol
Of the Isle of Man, also a symbol associated with druidism. Soft harp strings shivered longingly upon the flowering day And Ceridwen’s smile was magic as it wandered down the bay, For Ellan Vannin’s waters were all mist wrapped in the dawn And Ceridwen’s love was blossoming, for it was not long born, Within her deep contentment, she imagined Heddwyn’s face As the morning sunlight cast his hair in windswept copper lace, And the Druids nodded wisely with the mysticism of age While the island’s breezes fluttered, as Ceridwen turned the page. Ceridwen’s own Triskelion shone brightly on her breast The sunlight gave such meaning to its ancient silver crest, And when Heddwyn gave the garment as a token of his love Harp music scattered jewelled notes from sacred realms above, Before the days had turned to years, bold Heddwyn took his Bride And wandered Ellan Vannin’s shores beneath her moonlit tide, Then as the druids scattered runes, Ceridwen’s son was born And he was named Iago by the bringers of the dawn. Life’s chapters turned beneath the stars, as young Iago grew And Heddwyn taught him truthfully, the wisdom that he knew, Ceridwen watched as man and boy strolled peacefully along The boy looked up and listened as his father sang a song, As braided copper windblown dreams cast haloes round each head Ceridwen called them home to eat, then packed them off to bed, And their lives held joys and sorrows as the seasons turned around For Ellan Vannin’s secrets held them all securely bound. But on the island, pages turned within the book of life And Heddwyn’s final chapters found him left without a wife, He carried on for just a while to watch Iago grow Then lay down quietly to drift upon the water’s flow, Iago’s sorrow faded as the pages turned again Leaving only precious memories and partly buried pain, Then Ellan Vannin kissed him, and he gently took her arm And his long lost memories cloaked him with a wondrous sense of calm… |
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Warrior Raconteur Member |
Keith,
I have been re-reading this, over and over, as time permits. Thanks so much for the terminology explanation. I write more colloquially and direct rather than so elegantly. Some can carry it off, some can't, for me, but here you did. I am still reading it, but with no responses so far, thought that I would chime in that I liked it, and that the last verses wrapped up a life well lived and the comfort of that for me. We are tied as much to our land and culture, as we are to life, which weave, makes the warp of life. Thanks. If you see a worthy man endeavor to emulate him. If you see an unworthy man, look inside yourself. Confucious www.rvroadie.com |
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