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remember #17 |
It’s time for a tree
I heard Papa say, I’ll go for my ax and we’re on our way. Jane got her coat and Dale his cap. Babe put on his boots and knotted the strap. To carry the tree I brought my toboggan our family dog Betz, in snow to her noggin . Now this was a job we all undertook, the very best tree for our Christmas book. There in the woods, this littlest tree, most covered with snow beckoned to me. But Papa said no! So we past it by he’s after that big one that caught his eye. It’s sure a beauty we all exclaimed, but that littlest tree in my thoughts remained. We loaded that big one so full and green trudged through the snow… a Norman Rockwell scene. I’ll always remember that Christmas eve and that littlest tree… that called to me. |
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Administrator |
Jack,
Awwww..... Your poem makes me think of "Emmett Otter's Jug Band Christmas". Emmett went out and cut the Christmas branch.... I love your poem and the nostalgia it elicits. I'm (quite) old enough now to reflect on Christmases past and it now seems as if it all took place in another world. If you see another little tree....capture it and make it your own and then write another poem and tell us about it, please..... “Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it.” Mark Twain |
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Wild(flower) member |
Oh, Jack! Nice! nice! nice! Kind of a Charlie Brown kind of a tree...how compassionate to want the "little guy" in the bunch!
"Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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Senti stuff... me likes of course!
This does make me go "awww" as it does Galatea! The very very unusual rhyme caught my fancy, "toboggan/noggin", hehe "the very best tree for our Christmas book." -I'm a bit lost on the Christmas book part... you just imply a tree that you'd remember when you look back, correct? I’ll always remember that Christmas eve and that littlest tree… that called to me. It's touchingly cute you remember, the littlest I luv the way the last stanza seems to be written from the present, adult perspective and the rest of it from that of the child, for ex, Jane got her coat and Dale his cap. Babe put on his boots and knotted the strap. ~impressions of a child. Hope this year you have a cool little tree for Christmas ---- "It's a damn cold night Trying to figure out this life, (...) I don't know who you are but I... I'm with you." ~Avril Lavigne, I'm with you [found here] |
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Galatea
Children are in their own world for so short a time. Their dead-set on making us old. Flutter I think my dad spent more on the tree than on us. His was always voted the best tree in the family. Share You don’t have a Christmas book? I believe there are more pictures taken at Christmas than at any other time. Don’t rely on memory, that’s like going to sea in a sieve. In sharing All the names in this are my siblings, with the exception of the dog, she played herself. Thanks for taking time to respond. Jack |
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The Whiskered One Member |
Jack...well this excellent poem certainly helped to get me in the Christmas spirit.
I remember many trips way back into the Thirteen Acre Wood, what we call home, to find the perfect Christmas tree. It had to be at least thirteen feet tall and fill half the living room. Personally, I always preferred the Charlie Brown Christmas tree...seeing as I had to haul the bugger out from a mile back in the bush. Your poem invoked some fond memories from Christmases past...thank you my friend. “ Lionheart ~ I wish they would only take me as I am." -Vincent Van Gogh |
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Oh, Jack!
This brings back so many Christmas Tree "hunting" memories. Like the time I had the hiccups so bad while shopping for a tree, my dad made me go back and wait in the car! Oh, and the time my sisters and I were out in the woods cutting down our own trees(the youngest one's brilliant idea) and that very same sibling collapsed from an asthma attack. We rushed her to the hospital all right, but not until we loaded all the trees on to the truck! ( some things are a priority you know! I won't be putting up a tree this year due to my evil and very destructive cat from Helle, which has me rather depressed, but your poem helped me get in to the Holiday spirit, and for that I am very greatful! Maybe I'll put a tree up any ways and lock "Miss Sassy Pants" in the vacuum cleaner closet for three weeks. That'll teach her! Thanks, Dad! Your poetry always warms my heart. |
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Jack,
I wonder if you'll wander into the woods and find that 'littlest tree' all big and sturdy now. Oh oops, they take decades to grow don't they? And it will go on. Thank you for sharing this mem'rable incident MoMule. Children do find beauty in the most disregarded things/places. “If I should die,” said I to myself, “I have left no immortal work behind me — nothing to make my friends proud of my memory — that I have loved the principle of beauty in all things, and if I had had time I would have made myself remembered.” ~ John Keats |
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remember #17 |
Lionheart and La J
It would seem this small offering has call up fond memories. As I warmed over some bygone memories for you, in your responses you brightened my day. Sanya I loved going into the woods with my kids to cut our own Christmas tree, it seemed to instill a deeper feeling for the season. After thought The house has been treeless for too long, I think I hear the littlest tree. Jack |
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Administrator |
Please write us another about this year's tree Jack.
“Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it.” Mark Twain |
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Mudslidin' Administrator ![]() |
Dad,
Your poem brings memories of my childhood and us girls begging my father to bring home the sad looking tree as opposed to the one he wanted to get. I guess it's why we rescue less fortunate things to this day. Including the three cats that are currently ruining the tree as I type. Of course there was the tree from three years ago that sent me to the emergency room to get six stitches. Can't say as if I was feeling any love for that particular fir, but all of the other ones get my support! Merry Christmas, Dad. I love you tons! |
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Becky,
I’ll try but don’t count on it. I haven’t had a tree in eleven years. Here’s hopping you have a Mary Christmas Pam, I always remember those Christmas’s when I was a kid. We were ungodly poor but I didn’t know it. Looking back mom and dad tried their best to make what they could afford into something special, and they did. I don’t begrudge those years I cherish them. Here’s hopping all is well in your life. As love lights another Christmas, Mary Christmas, Pam. |
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After having grumpily settling on a smallish tree this year after being told by the 9 year old that she just had to have THAT tree, (with back up from the peanut gallery) I had a rethink about it after reading this Jack. It's not the size of the tree but the memories that go with it. Our tree doesn't "match", it won't be on the cover of any magazines but every ornament on it has a story and a memory that is special to one of us.
It's hard to carry on with traditions when an important part of those traditions is no longer with us but we do it so that the younger generations will be able to enjoy them as well. My mom reluctantly agreed to a tree this year after two years without. I'm sure that Dad would agree that just because he's not there, there's no reason why the tree shouldn't be! Besides, the new great-grandbaby's will need to have something to pull over! Kathleen ************ It is better to remain silent and let people think you are an idiot, than to open your mouth and confirm this impression. Irvine Welsh (1958 -      ) ~ Excerpt: If You Liked School You'll Love Work |
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Wild(flower) member |
Oh, Jack! I had forgotten this one...I'm glad it got bumped up on here to enjoy again. My heart would have been with the littlest tree also. I think you showed just what kind of a person you are~~warm, caring & compassionate, with a soft spot for the underdog. Hugs from MA all the way to MO & happy holiday wishes to you & your family. Joan
"Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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Kathleen,
From the mouths of babes, I wish I could force myself to put up a tree but the joy that was once there is gone and then I think of the mess in taking it down. Best wishes to you and your family this Christmas and good health in the new year. God Bless Jack Dear friend, It was a pleasant surprise to myself as well. The memories of that once was family brings a lump to my throat. Those were stressful times but Christmas brought us all together. Or maybe it was the tree? Jack |
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