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I have been to Hell and back
a time or two for sure. Once or twice I even thought I'd approached Heaven's door. No more! Now I know what heaven is-- you send me with your touch. I'm floating upward, upward... I love you oh so much! When once again I descend from wondrous, sweetest bliss, you take me gently in your arms and place the softest kiss. "Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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Me thinks love has found our lost butterfly and her heart flutters with throbbing passion.
Jack |
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Methinks you're right~~and in September he picked me--->WILDFLOWERS! Forget-Me-Nots, no less! And now I wish for you an amazing sequence of coincidences/events as I have experienced that has brought this person to me. Dreams do come true~~
~~flutter~~ PS I think first, though, you have to lay off the beans on date night! "Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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Well I finally got around to reading this. I agree with M.M. No one could write such a piece unless they was a hugging and a kissing and such. I haven't kissed in so long that I am out of practice.
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Well...whatcha waitin' fer?? Grab your gal and plant one on her...it's Valentine's Day!
Thanks for reading & replying~~appreciated.~~flutter~~ "Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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Oh yes! This one's where it's at. No rhetoric, no cliche, just sincere, heartfelt emotion. I know what you wanted in this poem and you accomplished it admirably!
s-s-s-s-s-weet! fp At the end of the day ... it gets dark ... |
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Flutter,
It has been too long. This poem seems familiar to me but I cannot remember if I have read it before. In any case it was as wonderful a read this time. Thank you for posting this, I enjoyed it -LM |
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Thank you! No, this is a new one. I wish this place would pick up...nice to see a familiar face.
"Me, my thoughts are flower strewn Ocean storm, bayberry moon. I have got to leave to find my way...." ~~REM |
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